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You had produced some concise work with your blog entries.  In order to develop the detail to your work you need to revise your class notes and add some detail to the comments you make, for example, look at the work on Dyer and Stars, Negus and the video as a promotional tool.  You have been creative with and to an extent visually dynamic with your blogging – there is a clear sense of brand identity.

You have produced proficient work with your blog.  There is a good understanding of what the  task demby providing more annotated points.